雅思大作文评分标准解读及范例

参加一门考试，最重要的就是弄清楚这场考试的评分标准。大多数的中国学生对于评分标准都是抱着一个不太了解也不太care的态度。因为在国内读书的时候，考试大多都是生硬的abcd选择题。并且中国考生也不太习惯于质疑老师的评分方式。所以大多数中国学生对于评分标准都是抱着无所谓的态度。但是这里maggie老师要说的是，考试，尤其是对于雅思的口语和写作考试，全面了解和解读评分标准是可以帮助我们积极备考的最有效方法之一！这里maggie老师会用自己的话略解读下雅思大作文写作考试的评分标准并且附上一篇雅思5分作文范例并附上考官点评。希望对各位烤鸭们会有所帮助。

雅思大作文写作考试的评分标准：

1.写作任务回应情况：写作任务回应情况说白了就是考试让你干嘛你就干嘛。问你是agree还是disagree那你一定要给一个清晰的回答。并且在给了一个清晰的回答后还要开始清晰明确的给出支持的观点的理由并且有效的发展你的理由（举例子）。考试让你写250字以上就一定不要写249个字（相信我如果你的字数不够，考官一定会知道）。

2.连贯与衔接：简单说来就是你句子与句子之间的衔接，以及段落与段落之间的衔接（表各种关系的连接词的使用）。对于连贯与衔接这点最重要的还有：一定要用段落写作！！并且每个段落一定要有一个清晰的中心主题！！（意思就是不能随便写到哪儿就分个段。而是根据写作内容合理分段）

3.词汇量：maggie曾经拜读过一位考雅思的大姐写的作文。各种华丽词汇的各种堆砌。可是她写的句子10句我读不懂5句。我当时给这位大姐谦虚的提出了我的建议：清晰易懂的内容比华丽词藻的堆砌更重要。大姐不听之。遂去考雅思。作文5分也。所以对于词汇maggie我只能说：华丽的词汇虽好，不要滥用。

4.语法：简单说来就是要使用复杂句。复杂句一个没有的雅思作文不会上6分。

下面给大家看一篇5分作文。题目是：

International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.

Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

In my opinion advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Firstly, many countries like Egypt or Thailand live from tourism. Lots of people work there as a seilsmens or tourist guides. These countries without support of tourists wouldn't be able to function properly.

Secondly, in countries visited by tourists are plenty of places where people just can’t pass because of rare animals or plants.

Another thing is that people like travelling and seeing new exotic places. They like lie on the beach or swim in ocean,

Furthermore, tourism is now more growing industry highering thousands of people. There are making new places to work and to have fun.

But on the other hand, people often forget that they aren’t the only beings on the planet.

Many tourists are living garbage just anywhere. Some of them wasn’t an exotic souvenir so they pay for illegal things like dead or live animals or some sculpture.

To sum up I think international travelling is a good thing but people must realize that there is something else besides them. They need to know that flora and fauna needs to be protected. People have to enjoy their holidays but also protect environment.

考官分析：

1.写作任务回应情况：作文题目被原封不动的copy并且用在了第一段。一旦把这段copy的34个字拿了下来，那么这篇作文只有短短194个字。因此被扣分。除此之外，这哥们儿回应了写作要求，并且表达了自己的观点。然而，行文发展，尤其是第三自然段中的发展不甚清晰。

2.连贯与衔接：这哥们儿思路还是很清晰的。总的来说行文有逻辑的进行了推进。但是出现了一些不太恰当的连接词。例如secondly和furthermore这两个词出现在这儿就不太恰当。代词使用也有不恰当。例如出现在第四自然段里第二句里的”they”，用来指代第一句里的”people”就不太清晰。同样还有一些连接词的使用太过于机械，例如第六自然段里的”but on the other hand”。除此以外，段落的分段方式不仅过于短，还不恰当。

3.词汇：这哥们儿词汇量还是不错滴。用来回应这个写作任务是差不多滴。但是对于词汇的控制稍显薄弱。更别说一系列令人陶醉的的拼写错误了。

4.语法：简单句与复杂句都有。写复杂句的时候有一些错误。尽管这些错误都很明显，并没有太过于影响文章内容。

最后maggie给大家附上一篇同样题目的7分作文范例。

Tourism is a very big industry in the modern time and is growing quite rapidly. Thousands of people travel everywhere to various destinations every year. Arguments have come up regarding the benefits and negative impacts of tourism in places and on its local inhabitants and environment; however, I believe there are more advantages than disadvantages of international tourism.

People travel for various reasons; we travel for business purposes, holidays, visit friends and relatives etc. Travelling is mostly seen as a recreational activity. Tourism has many advantages. Tourism can play a tremendous part in a country’s economy. The more tourists visit a country and spend money there, the better it is for the country. That way more money is circulated within the country and even the stability of their currency rate of exchange persists if not improve. Vendors and shops get to sell more goods and make an income. Tourism also has its non-monetary advantages; it brings cultures and people closer. People from all around the world get to share their culture with each other and even learn more. This is a good opportunity in education.

Tourism seems to have some disadvantages too; However, I believe the problems caused by tourism are not something that cannot be solved or prevented. A lot of people believe that tourism can destroy or deviate culture and causes quite an impact on visited locations, such as pollution and littering. People can adhere to their own beliefs and way of life if they want to; no one can really forcefully influence someone to change from their morals and ethics. Pollution can be avoided by increasing usage of environmentally friendly vehicles used for tours and rents, warnings and visual education on littering and smoking, specific times can be allocated for tours to certain areas, such as peak times where local inhabitants feel uncomfortable due to too many foreigners.

Where there are problems there can always be solutions. Tourism brings great amount of advantages for any place in many ways and is a “win-win” enhance process. They very few problems caused can always be avoided or taken care of. I believe tourism should be highly promoted, specially in traditional and poor countries with natural beauty such as Thailand.

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