11.12 雅思写作真题高分解析

各位同学大家好：

我是你们的Henry老师~今天我来和大家分享11月3号的雅思写作大作文，题目是：

More and more people move into big cities to live. What is the reason forthis? Do you think it is a good thing or bad thing?

这个题目把report和argument一起出了。那么，我们遇到这样的题目，该如何去写呢？

首先，在开头引出这个话题之后，我们要分析这个趋势的原因，我们可以从以下内容进行分析：

The reason for this trend might involve the recognitionthat there are a wide range of opportunities in large cities. 这些机会包括哪些内容呢？例如，medical care, education and employment. 这些机会会怎么样呢？These opportunities could contribute to the increase inthe population of the metropolises.

然后，在第3段，我们可以先从大城市人口增加的好处来说，例如：

After the talents move into the large cities, they aremore likely to seize the opportunities and achieve their capacities and skillsso as to gain a higher standard of living, which is also beneficial to thewhole society. Besides, urbanization is one of the most significant symbols ofcivilization and social progress, as well as giving an edge to the entirecountry in terms of development. In addition, with the migration of plenty of peoplefrom different areas, there could be a wide array of cultures in the largecities, which make the cities more interesting and attractive.

在第4段我们可以写大城市人口膨胀的坏处，例如：

One of the main concerns is the security of society. Withthe acceleration of the pace of life, an increasing number of people would liveunder high pressure in terms of work and life. Some of these people withresentment tend to commit crimes such as robbery, which is detrimental tosociety. Apart from this, the congestion and environmental pollution also haveimpact on the large cities negatively. Furthermore, with the rise of thepopulation of the metropolises, the supply of power and water also imposes aheavy burden to the government.

在最后，我们可以进行一个总结，可以说总体来讲，大城市人口越来越多利大于弊，对整个社会发展是很有好处的，但同时，政府职能应该加强，以解决上述问题。

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