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    雅思写作:如何悄无声息的连接逻辑



    今天咱们研究连接词,但不是小儿科的那种because, however, nevertheless, not also but also, 而是尝试用一些表达手法来尝试更顺畅的(同时也是让字数变多的)连接方法。


    【方法1: 把连接变修饰】


    例句是这样的

    The number of internet user is increasing at a rapid speed, because of the technology development in the past decades.

    如果将后半句变为前半句的修饰关系,那么就变成了:

    The number of internet user who are massively generated according to the past decades of technology development is increasing at a rapid speed.


    【方法2: 代词是个好朋友】


    例句是这样的

    The government spent a big part of tax income on building some facilities. However, those facilities cannot be fully used by every citizen.

    发现了两个facilities了吗?也许很多朋友想到了infrastructure来替换,但最好的方法是变成代词:

    The government spent a big part of tax income on building some facilities yet they cannot be fully used by all citizens.


    【方法3: 介词短语&插入语】


    例句是这样的

    The scientists need a lot of money to initiate a series of researches and projects. However, the government’s money has to be taken for improving people’s life quality firstly.

    若能把这两句放在一起并将所有的时间地点状态条件插入在其中,句子的连接就显得更顺畅了:

    Knowing the government’s money has to be taken for improving people’s life quality firstly, the scientists, however, still need a lot of money in order to initiate a series of researches and projects.


    希望以上的内容可以帮助到大家~~!


    --by Nick Yang


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