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    今天 Nicole 老师要跟大家一起膜拜一篇范文,注意了咳咳, 是膜拜。好了,说正题,Nicole 老师选了一篇老外写的雅思作文,话题是关于政府投资互联网基础建设的话题。这篇文章在使用大量相对而言复杂的用词的同时, 兼顾了文章的较有说服力的说理过程,没有丝毫的模板感觉。所以,是一篇有炫技感的高逼格文章。膜拜吧。


    Topic: In many countries, governments are spending a large amount of money on improving Internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?

    在许多国家,政府在花巨资升级互联网络。这种投入的原因是?这是政府财政最合理的使用领域?


    Recently, an ample amount of governmental investment money is being poured into the amelioration of the Internet supply. This phenomenon has its root from a host of factors, and I would discuss that there are various available ways to allocate this money more effectively.


    To begin with, it is understandable why enhancing the quality of the Internet provision has become a key national investment portfolio. Firstly, with the availability of a better Internet connection, an extensive avenue of information is opened up for the inhabitants. Most residents would have omnipresent access to both international and local social news, and it has never been easier for those who live in remote areas to reach a wide range of information at a click of a button. Secondly, an improved Internet supply can facilitate the operation process of governmental companies. With stably functioning online platforms, corporations today would no longer find it difficult to approach their customers, manage their employees or organize videoconferences, which boosts the overall productivity. In the long run, the development of such firms makes great contribution to the thriving of the national economy.


    However, I believe that upgrading the Internet access is not the best way to allocate the government money. The primary reason is that the broadband connection in most countries today is fast enough to satisfy the basic demands of the public. For example, in China, hardly do individuals have to wait a long time for a web page to load, while online business meetings have even become popular years ago. Therefore, an improvement in the quality of the Internet supply can be deemed not obligatory and urgent. Another justification is that there are several other fields, which are being placed under strain and require the capital disbursement to function. To illustrate, a number of state hospitals in the UK have been conducting research on a complete cure for cancer, and it seems that this should be the investment priority.


    In final words, all aforementioned standpoints lead me to a concrete inference that it is reasonable of the authorities to spend money bettering the Internet provision, but there are ways to allocate the capital more appropriately.


    前方高能:(实在太多,稍稍举例)

    an ample amount of 大量的 ample 丰富的 adj

    be poured into 大量注入

    amelioration =improvement 改善 n

    investment portfolio 指一个投资活动的组合 have omnipresent access to 无所不在的网络通径 online platform 网络平台

    at a click of a button 仅仅点击一下

    make great contribution to 做出一个巨大的贡献 thriving 繁荣的;蒸蒸日上的

    broadband connection 宽带连接

    being placed under strain 面临压力

    capital disbursement 支出

    conduct research 进行研究

    investment priority 投资的优先顺序

    standpoints 立场,观点


    --by Nicole Mu


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